(BVBRANDON) BV SUNZOO (3-0) KO

[bvbrandon]

5 bars
due in 24 hours
usual rules

[bvbrandon]

Ill Show You The Art Of War Hit You Up With Gun Fu
Crack Ya Lungs Too Already Battered Ya Brain 4Got Howta Spell Sun Tzu

Put The Blade To His Dome Suoflay Some Mind Stew
Fuck A Test Pull Out The Shotty Just Ta Gauge Ya IQ

He Aint Got A Chain But Ima Imbed The Crome N His Vest
Dont Listen To His Pimp Talk Each Ho Is Incest

The Only Thing Lackin-Is-You Pierce His Hat-Wit-Tha-Tool
Like Im Poatchen Fags How I Mass-acre-Zoo

Ya Girl Pulln My Boxers Like The Corner Through In The Towel
When I was Putten Jewels In Her Jowels* U Was N The Pen Wit 2 N Ya Bowels DAMN

*jaw bones
*jews were burned alive

this faggot nigga usin gun talk against me
when the only hammer he's ever seen was MC

but me pa i packs a pis-tol, i wont miss yo
my index fold, i'll make it clap like flipmode

park a couple slugs in ya temple, detach ya mental
like new jack, broad daylight in front of ya kin-folk

just one stroke of my poison pen
will have you at the end of your road like boyz to men

S.hity A.ss R.appers S.uck you cant undermine the artist
because the sun is gone shine reguardless

FUCK LOL, dope verse man, real talk, my browser crashed halfway thru my verse i had to start over, too high to remember what i had key'd up

good luck, thanks for the battle

[bvbrandon]

LOL i had that happen to me the other day u got a nice verse too

VOTE

[C Mau]

Ill Show You The Art Of War Hit You Up With Gun Fu
Crack Ya Lungs Too Already Battered Ya Brain 4Got Howta Spell Sun Tzu
(haha nice ass nameplay here..i read the first line and said this is gonna be gay..but that second line is fire..4/5)4/5
Put The Blade To His Dome Suoflay Some Mind Stew
Fuck A Test Pull Out The Shotty Just Ta Gauge Ya IQ
(Nice gunplay..but no real punch..2/5)6/10
He Aint Got A Chain But Ima Imbed The Crome N His Vest
Dont Listen To His Pimp Talk Each Ho Is Incest
(hahahahahahahahah get em!@! haha...4/5) 10/15
The Only Thing Lackin-Is-You Pierce His Hat-Wit-Tha-Tool
Like Im Poatchen Fags How I Mass-acre-Zoo
(nice nice...3/5)13/20
Ya Girl Pulln My Boxers Like The Corner Through In The Towel
When I was Putten Jewels In Her Jowels* U Was N The Pen Wit 2 N Ya Bowels DAMN
(blah...kinda fay..2/5)15/25


15/25


Sunzoo


this faggot nigga usin gun talk against me
when the only hammer he's ever seen was MC
(Decent opener..3/5)3/5
but me pa i packs a pis-tol, i wont miss yo
my index fold, i'll make it clap like flipmode
(Filler..1/5)4/10
park a couple slugs in ya temple, detach ya mental
like new jack, broad daylight in front of ya kin-folk
(Filler..1/5)5/15
just one stroke of my poison pen
will have you at the end of your road like boyz to men
(nice..kidna filler..kinda not..2/5)7/20
S.hity A.ss R.appers S.uck you cant undermine the artist
because the sun is gone shine reguardless
(wow...gross....filler...gay..0/5)7/25




.MURKED.



v./bVb

RETURN THE FaVoR..


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[BorderLINE]

Pretty much agree wit C mau here

Bvbrandon

Ill Show You The Art Of War Hit You Up With Gun Fu
Crack Ya Lungs Too Already Battered Ya Brain 4Got Howta Spell Sun Tzu
Pretty good opener gets my approval lol

Put The Blade To His Dome Suoflay Some Mind Stew
Fuck A Test Pull Out The Shotty Just Ta Gauge Ya IQ
meh... not good or bad

He Aint Got A Chain But Ima Imbed The Crome N His Vest
Dont Listen To His Pimp Talk Each Ho Is Incest
...smh weak

The Only Thing Lackin-Is-You Pierce His Hat-Wit-Tha-Tool
Like Im Poatchen Fags How I Mass-acre-Zoo
meh

Sunzoo

this faggot nigga usin gun talk against me
when the only hammer he's ever seen was MC
ooooook, nice flow I guess you're gettin to somethin in the next line

but me pa i packs a pis-tol, i wont miss yo
my index fold, i'll make it clap like flipmode
You said he's usin gun-talk against you like you're above it or somethin then you use it...what?

park a couple slugs in ya temple, detach ya mental
like new jack, broad daylight in front of ya kin-folk
smh

just one stroke of my poison pen
will have you at the end of your road like boyz to men
:rolleyes: sorry...

S.hity A.ss R.appers S.uck you cant undermine the artist
because the sun is gone shine reguardless
nice wordplay good closer

OPENER: bvb
CLOSER: sun
FLOW: bvb
STRUCTURE: bvb
MULTIES: ...lack of
WORDPLAY: sun
PUNCHES: bvb
PERSONALS: sun

VOTE:BVB

thanks for votin fam...and yea i was thinkin bout the gunplay line man but like i told dude, my shit crashed and i aint wanna flake on the battle...i coulda came alot harder than i did

[BorderLINE]

In my opinion all you really need to do is come correct wit them punches, dude, you got potential I can see that.

[bvbrandon]

2-0

[bvbrandon]

UP 2-0

Opener - Bv ( Sun I dont like gun talk but u fed which is wors0e
Closer - Sun
Punches - BV
Personals - Sun
Flow - TIE
Wordplay - Tie

Vote -BV

Pretty evenly matched but imma go wit BV on this one by a hair

and I had to deduct points from sun for feeding otherwise might
of gon the other way

[bvbrandon]

3-0 KO KANG NICCA