SMG vs. Optimus Rhyme (Opt wins by KO)

[Guns]

Okay...

As agreed upon, no nameplays (that goes for crew names too)...

10 bars (20 lines)

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first of all thanks for the patience...

"you beat me in the human race!"

are you sure ya wanna do this SMG!? ya core is soft
this aint a game, ill leave this bitch in ruins like Lara Croft...
some say i wont win!? fuck it...this aint a plea for props
and your only 17, so i show it aint hard to beat the odds
shit but how can you stay in doubt? im blazin bouts...
ill rip ya body from ya sole like steppin in an asians house
who put you up to this man!? ya gonna get smashed in three
having the same blood type is the only way you a match for me
dude get some power, doesnt take much to split this coward
ill shower you w. hits while you can only hit the showers...
ya gonna get murdered quick, shoulda carried a weapon
you share a same sense w. fossil watches, buried in seconds
you wont make it through this match w. the lines i pitch over
you losin!? you can bet ya ass on it like a game of strip poker...
and i aint just killin SMG, Stars!? ya poor fools are channeled
i havent seen this many flops since a store fulll of sandals...
its funny because thinkin you can beat me is somethin guy
ill whip your ass so quick ppl will want you on there pumpkin pie
damn, ill knock you out the winnin circle and not to sound rude
but ill leave ya so 'bent outta shape' i can square dance around you...

[SMG]

Aight...I'll edit this post with my verse a lil' later, somebody else tryna get on the comp right now...

[SMG]

Fun facts: Had a written called "...day time dropped her watch", his old forum crashed (on which he was known as Boocifer)...

Okay...

You tradin' blows with vets...no way I'd lose to this homo-fruit
Duke couldn't pose a threat...directin' a terrorist photo shoot
Really should no-show, duke; funny, cats said that this fella was ill
But takin' pictures of ME's the closest he'll get to developin' skill
I'm known to swell up a grill or two...this fag'll fall a casualty
...After I make his blood dribble like basketball with family
Look, son...ya crew already lost...it ain't like ya'll s'posed to win
You'll find yourselves in the winners' circle...
...only with my squad closin' in...
Yo squad dependent on drafts; grabbin' rhymers known for bad cyphers
Thats mad tired..so I'll drop every pick-up- just call me a cab driver
I'm mad hyper with hits...got fire punches to leave you popped open
...and hit with so much flames, Nicorette couldn't getchu to stop smokin'
Saw Boocifer's lines...cats said they was tight when this dyke dropped 'em?
Yeah right...obviously Lyric Wars ain't the only one havin' site problems
You won't sell CDs...cuz ANY price this cunt puts on his rhymes
Wouldn't be a fair retail- even if they started with "Once upon a time"
DS, BITCH! You ain't close to us, I won't even bust like I'm s'posed to bust
Bring energy this battle? Nah- this MC's square enough for both of us
Ya writtens? They old as dust, son...and you ain't had what it takes to spit
Since "...day time dropped her watch" <<< cuz that written was a waste of it...

[SMG]

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Originally Posted by Optimus

you wont make it through this match w. the lines i pitch over
you losin!? you can bet ya ass on it like a game of strip poker...

Lol...nice...

[jthamind]

dope battle! gotta use the points system!!

Originally Posted by Optimus Rhyme

are you sure ya wanna do this SMG!? ya core is soft
this aint a game, ill leave this bitch in ruins like Lara Croft...

pretty good opener. 3.5/5

some say i wont win!? fuck it...this aint a plea for props
and your only 17, so i show it aint hard to beat the odds

liked these lines. 3.5/5

shit but how can you stay in doubt? im blazin bouts...
ill rip ya body from ya sole like steppin in an asians house

wasn't feeling this punch as much. 2/5

who put you up to this man!? ya gonna get smashed in three
having the same blood type is the only way you a match for me

not bad. 3/5

dude get some power, doesnt take much to split this coward
ill shower you w. hits while you can only hit the showers...

i'm really feeling this. 4.5/5

ya gonna get murdered quick, shoulda carried a weapon
you share a same sense w. fossil watches, buried in seconds

this is one of the best punches i've seen in a long time. 5/5

you wont make it through this match w. the lines i pitch over
you losin!? you can bet ya ass on it like a game of strip poker...

really liked these lines. 4.5/5

and i aint just killin SMG, Stars!? ya poor fools are channeled
i havent seen this many flops since a store fulll of sandals...

nice wordplay, but for some reason it didn't hit as hard as it should've. 2.5/5

its funny because thinkin you can beat me is somethin guy
ill whip your ass so quick ppl will want you on there pumpkin pie

kinda funny, nice wordplay. setup was cool. 3/5

damn, ill knock you out the winnin circle and not to sound rude
but ill leave ya so 'bent outta shape' i can square dance around you...

decent closer. 2.5/5

Originally Posted by SMG

You tradin' blows with vets...no way I'd lose to this homo-fruit
Duke couldn't pose a threat...directin' a terrorist photo shoot

i really liked this wordplay, strong opener. 4.5/5

Really should no-show, duke; funny, cats said that this fella was ill
But takin' pictures of ME's the closest he'll get to developin' skill

eh. kinda weakened the punch since you used the "photo" idea twice in a row. still flipped well though. 3/5

I'm known to swell up a grill or two...this fag'll fall a casualty
...After I make his blood dribble like basketball with family

not bad. setup could've been better. 3/5

Look, son...ya crew already lost...it ain't like ya'll s'posed to win
You'll find yourselves in the winners' circle...
...only with my squad closin' in...

i was feeling this. 4/5

Yo squad dependent on drafts; grabbin' rhymers known for bad cyphers
Thats mad tired..so I'll drop every pick-up- just call me a cab driver

i liked this idea, but both lines were kind of overworded. if you could've worded them better, you might have gotten an extra half a point. 3/5

I'm mad hyper with hits...got fire punches to leave you popped open
...and hit with so much flames, Nicorette couldn't getchu to stop smokin'

wasn't feelin this as much. 2.5/5

Saw Boocifer's lines...cats said they was tight when this dyke dropped 'em?
Yeah right...obviously Lyric Wars ain't the only one havin' site problems

not bad, i like how you flipped this. good personal. 4/5

You won't sell CDs...cuz ANY price this cunt puts on his rhymes
Wouldn't be a fair retail- even if they started with "Once upon a time"

eh, wasn't really feeling this. 2/5

DS, BITCH! You ain't close to us, I won't even bust like I'm s'posed to bust
Bring energy this battle? Nah- this MC's square enough for both of us

i get what you're saying, but i wasn't feeling it much. didn't like the setup either. 2.5/5

Ya writtens? They old as dust, son...and you ain't had what it takes to spit
Since "...day time dropped her watch" <<< cuz that written was a waste of it...

sorry, but i can't give you points for this. Booc didn't drop that piece, it was some guy named "Optimus Prime"(only spelled wierd). Booc's name is Optimus Rhyme. well, i might give you half a point since you flipped it decent. 0.5/5

Boocifer--34/50

SMG--29/50



i've seen way better from SMG. he started off well, but had some rough spots in the middle. Booc was pretty consistent, wasn't perfect but didn't really have any bad spots.


Boocifer > SMG

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[Guns]

more votes ppl!?
pc

[Styk Figer]

O.R:
are you sure ya wanna do this SMG!? ya core is soft
this aint a game, ill leave this bitch in ruins like Lara Croft...
Ok opener nothing special...2.5/5
some say i wont win!? fuck it...this aint a plea for props
and your only 17, so i show it aint hard to beat the odds
dis is dope.... 4/5
shit but how can you stay in doubt? im blazin bouts...
ill rip ya body from ya sole like steppin in an asians house
not working for me.....2.5/5
who put you up to this man!? ya gonna get smashed in three
having the same blood type is the only way you a match for me
decent not hard but clever....3.5/5
dude get some power, doesnt take much to split this coward
ill shower you w. hits while you can only hit the showers...
hahahah....4/5
ya gonna get murdered quick, shoulda carried a weapon
you share a same sense w. fossil watches, buried in seconds
damn follow up was a bang 4/5
you wont make it through this match w. the lines i pitch over
you losin!? you can bet ya ass on it like a game of strip poker...
played but flipped well 4/5
and i aint just killin SMG, Stars!? ya poor fools are channeled
i havent seen this many flops since a store fulll of sandals...
no hit but points for creativity...3.5/5
its funny because thinkin you can beat me is somethin guy
ill whip your ass so quick ppl will want you on there pumpkin pie
ok...kinda saw it 3.5/5
damn, ill knock you out the winnin circle and not to sound rude
but ill leave ya so 'bent outta shape' i can square dance around you...
played but flip good 3.5/5


SMG:
You tradin' blows with vets...no way I'd lose to this homo-fruit
Duke couldn't pose a threat...directin' a terrorist photo shoot
good opener stronger as a supportin bar though 3.5/5
Really should no-show, duke; funny, cats said that this fella was ill
But takin' pictures of ME's the closest he'll get to developin' skill
hahahah dopeness 4/5
I'm known to swell up a grill or two...this fag'll fall a casualty
...After I make his blood dribble like basketball with family
dis bars a let down 2.5/5
Look, son...ya crew already lost...it ain't like ya'll s'posed to win
You'll find yourselves in the winners' circle...
...only with my squad closin' in...
nice.... 3.5/5
Yo squad dependent on drafts; grabbin' rhymers known for bad cyphers
Thats mad tired..so I'll drop every pick-up- just call me a cab driver
3/5 kinda worded wrong
I'm mad hyper with hits...got fire punches to leave you popped open
...and hit with so much flames, Nicorette couldn't getchu to stop smokin'
3/5 very predictable
Saw Boocifer's lines...cats said they was tight when this dyke dropped 'em?
Yeah right...obviously Lyric Wars ain't the only one havin' site problems
2.5/5 dez personal didnt hit
You won't sell CDs...cuz ANY price this cunt puts on his rhymes
Wouldn't be a fair retail- even if they started with "Once upon a time"
3/5 no hit tho
DS, BITCH! You ain't close to us, I won't even bust like I'm s'posed to bust
Bring energy this battle? Nah- this MC's square enough for both of us
2.5/5 wasnt fellin it
Ya writtens? They old as dust, son...and you ain't had what it takes to spit
Since "...day time dropped her watch" <<< cuz that written was a waste of it...
decent 3/5

Opener: SMG
Flow: O.Rhyme
Metas:O.Rhyme
Personal: SMG
Punches: O. Rhyme
Multies: Tie
Closer: Tie
Vote: O. Rhyme

[Guns]

lol thanx yall but Styk his last bar was a misdirect personal, that wasnt written by me lol good shit though thanx for the votes guys uppin!
pc

[SMG]

Yeah, I see that now...

...sure wish someone would have told me before...like when I made the callout thread titled "Aight, Optimus Prime"...

...lol...that might explain why you never responded to it...

[Khem]

Opener: Tie
Flow: O.R.
Metas: O.R.
Personals: SMG
Punches: O.R.
Multies: O.R.
Closer: O.R.

Vote: Categories made it seem like Optimus won by a Landslide, even tho he didn't.....I Enjoyed SMG's Verse More, But I Think Optimus' Hit Harder......

O.R.

[Guns]

umm...KO corect!?...
if you have anything to say SMG let me know...
but as for now i win right J!?
pc

[jthamind]

this was a memorable one.

[jthamind]

Fossil watch line and pose a threat line >> umm..a lot of stuff.