(theman080) vs vodka(TKO)

oh wow.. this was bad.. lol....

theman... your vocab was good, but, this is a battle, not an open mic.. noone cares about how many useless words you can throw into a verse... though you had some decent punches though.. and the flow was aight also...

vodka... no.. just, no... fix your structure, flow, and consistency.. everything was wrong wit that verse, i cant pick just one or two, lol... i see the potential though.. jus take your time when writing your verse...

punches - theman
personals - tie
flow - theman

vote = theman.. almost one-sided IMO...

[jthamind]

theman080


Dude is useless when he talks assumed foolish as he crawls
Towards the obvious revalation that his psyeudonym is false

weak attempt at a personal...and setup was bad...not a good opener...

To many contradictions to follow it, first zero percent proof is obvious
Plus his style's cheaper than a bottle is and no hos swallow it

setup was aight, punch is boo boo...

I tone flows monsterous, buck shots like Rambo and he can't stand those
Every night my fans grow while his is smaller than the I-Pod Nano

setup was wack...nobody cares about your fan base so quit uppin yourself...and the ipod punch is horribly weak...

I summer tan foes, gutless fukk fell - shoved the knife thru ya belt
Bytch mad I grab a chick at the hip while he gets drunk by himself (think a bit)

didn't like the setup but the punch is pretty nice considering it goes with his name...

Ya dumbstruck when I bomb this ya nonsense is demolished
This fag Vodka's always finished quick when he comes out the closet

wow...very bad closer...



Vodka


he's the chick his lyrics make the evidence conclusive he trash i can't loose dis, i,ll toss this bum
my verse is exclusive but u o.ffer n.o e.xcuses well how u gonna tell the crew u lost this one

setup is overworded...punch wasn't great, but i'll let it slide...not a very good opener though...


i ballin the cort and the gun pointin ta pop ya men
stardom u fallin short like boykins reachin the top off the rim

setup is super boo boo...and i hope you didn't expect that punch to hit...because it didn't...

u not the man (chick) and u'll be 0-80 if u keep battlin dudes like vodka
and u cant take the shots to the head so R.i.p when i cock back an red dot ya(check the name play)

the setup is just...wow...bad...and the nameplay attempt is just that...an attempt...a bad one...



this battlin was wack, but still, how did Vodka get a vote?...he had no punches whatsoever and his structure and setups didn't suck, they ARE suck...no offense, but you need work...theman, your style is straight, just work on original punches and better setups...


VOTE--theman080

yo thats a dq he changed his verse

*notice the edit at the bottom when you edit anything.

yo i won first vet voted the admov voted then fang so 3-0 ko

[ThE_S-O-A-L-K]

IM SURE IT WAS ALSO {NO DIKK RIDIN'}

if yall say vets vote was not counted well neither is arkanes

[theman080]

calm down, arkane broke it down and Vet didn't, the mods no how to do their job you pussy

damn im a pussy?

[Veteran]

hurry and finish this will you..lololol

nice verse theman