pi0neer vs. Thrice (Topical) (1-0) [Thrice concedes due to vote shortage]

[pi0neer]

can we get some votes please..... as far as his vote, i'm not going to discout it, if you can get him to explain it a little bit more.....if he can go into a little bit more specifics about the vote, I wouldn't have a problem, but for all he wrote, he might not have even read the battle and we wouldn't know.

i guess people don't want to vote though because this was a long battle. we should try PMing some of the topical heads to vote from neutral crews. If Jthamind wants to vote, I would allow that even though it's your crew...... idk what else to say.... I thought this was a good battle, but it's getting slept on.

[thrice]

pming him to explain is too much work.

0-0

votes?!

[Khem]

good battle.....here's the breakdown:

Pioneer Best Lines:

Originally Posted by pi0neer

From a traitor undercover, denied thrice by his brother,
The price he had to pay cause he lived his life for others

dope.....

Originally Posted by pi0neer

Yet and still he was hesitant, cause to be just was his goal,
But truthfully he’d sell his soul for a few points in the polls,

nice....good flow

Originally Posted by pi0neer

He spoke, “Forgive them father,” as death extinguished his spark,
Then with a flash of lightning, the room was reclaimed by dark.....

NICE closer........good piece

Thrice Best Lines:

Originally Posted by thrice

I see the arm…a slap brings me back to the present moment
I felt nauseas with my eyes closed…thumbs pressed them open

I like this.....

Originally Posted by thrice

Fingertips hot glued, face held the mask kept the shells in a bag
Filled it with rocks…let it sink in the lake, Ziploc also held the mag

nice flow, pieced together well...

Final Thoughts: Honestly, I wasn't feeling either story that much....but you can only do so much with a chosen topic. I felt pi0neer's was a little more creative, and the vocabulary was better along with the rhyming in certain parts. Thrice's story wasn't that original, and even though pi0neer's didn't really attract me to the piece that much either, it had a different vibe and it wasn't the usual piece you expect to read. But at other times, Thrice would have strong vocab and dope content in the bar, which pi0neer didn't always have. Overall, it really seemed like pi0neer put more work into his piece, and it was consistent throughout the whole written. I've read thrice's older pieces, and they are usually better than this, but judging from his comments, I'm thinking this one was rushed. Props to both

Final Vote: pi0neer

[pi0neer]

thanks for the well explained vote.....

upping 1-0

p.s. Can a mod clean this thread up if possible? If so it would be appreciated....

[thrice]

you win fam. good verse.

[pi0neer]

thanks man, good battle..... too bad it wasn't really voted on

[doe memba]

Ya'll really want this closed at 1-0?

[thrice]

yea, its been open for three weeks and only one vote. its cool. i dont mind.

[doe memba]

Alright...if you said no i would have voted...but, closed.