Doc Holiday vs Kami

[Doc Holiday]

Doc Holiday vs Kami

Ok here's the rules from your callout

12 lines
Due Monday

No biting, feeding, swaying you know all this shit

DQ'd voters Crew, Floz, Fran
Explained votes only

Good Luck

- Peace.

[Lee Gully]

Edit: Since he said he was posting today, I posted in this post to save space...

Let's get into it...

You can’t play me bitch…only people in his crew’ll say he’s sick.
No one else respects anything doctrine…this board is atheist.
What you gon’ slay me with!? Ya no talent ass’ll prolly no show…
Man, this disorderly con ducks more than two angry drunken hobos.
That was a low blow…but it’s the truth, he’s proof that you’re lame son.
Can’t name one…person who even remembers what site you came from.
Your gang’s ONE? Come on Doc…I’ll leave botanist piss cause…
I’m wiping out all of Holly and its way before Christmas.
This bitch sucks…I don’t have to throw punches, this guy’s a joke.
I’ll win this battle just for kicks…thrown at the side of his throat.
Yo, your crew’s BEEN stared stiff, but it’ll only take one punch prolly
…leaving this has Ben Stiller…like his wife in Along Came Polly.

[Lee Gully]

*Bumps For Doc*

[Sworn Truth]

eeep. that made me laugh. the whole verse...

[Doc Holiday]

Thanks for the vote sway Sworn before I posted props, anyway sorry im a lil late I key'd a verse up in here yesterday n when I hit post the server crrashed on me again so will re-do now

Gotta give props minus the played concepts you a funny ole geek
But if we honestly speek, you jus the ole me minus the heat
Silently creep n fam really its US that thinks ya flows shitty
I mean how you NOT get nominated H.O.F.......
When GANG makes up over half the voting commitee
Chokin ya silly but keep postin you DRUNK we all past doubt
Shit if ya young ass got a GUINESS book record you'd probably pass out
Get blast now you Peter Pan here n 1 hook'll harm ya health
Me i'm calm as hell
You the 1 followin his footsteps tryna find a shadow of ya former self
Have ya callin help but son chill I aint gotta violantly murk
Jus silently smurk, check the pound to the dollar see
Im already at double ya worth
You in trouble for cert, ya whole cliques a vision of shook
No I aint JK, but i will beat kami's ass wit the latest wizardin book

- Peace

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- Peace.

[Reka]

this is what im talkin bout

kami

You can’t play me bitch…only people in his crew’ll say he’s sick.
No one else respects anything doctrine…this board is atheist.

atheist lines are gettin use to much but u opened it alrgiht

What you gon’ slay me with!? Ya no talent ass’ll prolly no show…
Man, this disorderly con ducks more than two angry drunken hobos.

nice..

That was a low blow…but it’s the truth, he’s proof that you’re lame son.
Can’t name one…person who even remembers what site you came from.

good personal..

Your gang’s ONE? Come on Doc…I’ll leave botanist piss cause…
I’m wiping out all of Holly and its way before Christmas.

forced the punch tho it was cool, u coulda set it up better

This bitch sucks…I don’t have to throw punches, this guy’s a joke.
I’ll win this battle just for kicks…thrown at the side of his throat.

filler bars..

Yo, your crew’s BEEN stared stiff, but it’ll only take one punch prolly
…leaving this has Ben Stiller…like his wife in Along Came Polly.

never seen the movie cant judge the bar


doc

Gotta give props minus the played concepts you a funny ole geek
But if we honestly speek, you jus the ole me minus the heat

decent opener

Silently creep n fam really its US that thinks ya flows shitty
I mean how you NOT get nominated H.O.F.......
When GANG makes up over half the voting commitee

lol truth hurts

Chokin ya silly but keep postin you DRUNK we all past doubt
Shit if ya young ass got a GUINESS book record you'd probably pass out

haa clever tho i had to read it twice to get it

Get blast now you Peter Pan here n 1 hook'll harm ya health
Me i'm calm as hell
You the 1 followin his footsteps tryna find a shadow of ya former self

nice personal

Have ya callin help but son chill I aint gotta violantly murk
Jus silently smurk, check the pound to the dollar see
Im already at double ya worth

straight punch

You in trouble for cert, ya whole cliques a vision of shook
No I aint JK, but i will beat kami's ass wit the latest wizardin book

lol nice ending

aside from some structural issues, id say doc had a better verse, kami had those two filler bars that hurt him at the end


vote doc

[Seyance]

You can’t play me bitch…only people in his crew’ll say he’s sick.
No one else respects anything doctrine…this board is atheist.
this was dope to me, i dunno if its played or what not.. i don't think reka got the doctor-in / doctrine play..
What you gon’ slay me with!? Ya no talent ass’ll prolly no show…
Man, this disorderly con ducks more than two angry drunken hobos.
naa, just abit bland really bruv
That was a low blow…but it’s the truth, he’s proof that you’re lame son.
Can’t name one…person who even remembers what site you came from.
lol, funny.. seen this kinda thing alot though, but personal regardless.
Your gang’s ONE? Come on Doc…I’ll leave botanist piss cause…
I’m wiping out all of Holly and its way before Christmas.
i don't get this? whats holly got to do with doc? get at me with an explaination, but since i didn't get it.. naaaaaaaa
This bitch sucks…I don’t have to throw punches, this guy’s a joke.
I’ll win this battle just for kicks…thrown at the side of his throat.
sick, sick.. my kinda vibe.
Yo, your crew’s BEEN stared stiff, but it’ll only take one punch prolly
…leaving this has Ben Stiller…like his wife in Along Came Polly.
hahaha, i didn't get it the first time i read throw.. 'hasben', i like the play maybe a little bit forced & it didn't really have WOW force to it either.

Gotta give props minus the played concepts you a funny ole geek
But if we honestly speek, you jus the ole me minus the heat
naaa, didn't really see how this hit him.. i laughed at the 'ole' too lol.
Silently creep n fam really its US that thinks ya flows shitty
I mean how you NOT get nominated H.O.F.......
When GANG makes up over half the voting commitee
this was dope, read it and was like... ooh snap, nice stuff
Chokin ya silly but keep postin you DRUNK we all past doubt
Shit if ya young ass got a GUINESS book record you'd probably pass out
i see what you were going for, but it didn't really work out, i see the guiness reference to him gettin drunk from one, and if he got in the book he'd pass out.. but it's either one or the other, making it a double meaning knocks it off.. if you'd of mentioned the record book in the setup and just left guiness in the punch, it'd of been nicer.. cause you'd of taken them one way, then hit em the other.. but in the end it just came out abit weird and confusing
Get blast now you Peter Pan here n 1 hook'll harm ya health
Me i'm calm as hell
You the 1 followin his footsteps tryna find a shadow of ya former self
sick sick, seen a similar concept before.. but i was feelin' this regardless
Have ya callin help but son chill I aint gotta violantly murk
Jus silently smurk, check the pound to the dollar see
Im already at double ya worth
seen this kinda thing way too many times for it to have an effect.
You in trouble for cert, ya whole cliques a vision of shook
No I aint JK, but i will beat kami's ass wit the latest wizardin book
wasn't feelin' this.. came out abit corny for me.

Vote - Kami.. i just felt he edged it abit, Doc came nicer than usual and was impressed with 1-2 lines he dropped here, definately upped his style alot but some stuff came out pretty corny and had it losing the the hard hitting effect of the verse that came out through those 1-2 lines. Kami came okay, i've been him drop nicer shit.. he too had 1-2 lines that dropped real nice, especially that opener.. real nice way to start it off. Kinda dissapointed about some of his verse.. expected alot more i think.. but i think he JUST edged it due to a few other lines that were better than the others of docs.

[Styk Figer]

Originally Posted by Lee Gully

Edit: Since he said he was posting today, I posted in this post to save space...

Let's get into it...

You can’t play me bitch…only people in his crew’ll say he’s sick.
No one else respects anything doctrine…this board is atheist.
okish
What you gon’ slay me with!? Ya no talent ass’ll prolly no show…
Man, this disorderly con ducks more than two angry drunken hobos.
lol funny
That was a low blow…but it’s the truth, he’s proof that you’re lame son.
Can’t name one…person who even remembers what site you came from.
hahaha nice personal.... really i dont know where he came from.
Your gang’s ONE? Come on Doc…I’ll leave botanist piss cause…
I’m wiping out all of Holly and its way before Christmas.
ehhh weak wordplay
This bitch sucks…I don’t have to throw punches, this guy’s a joke.
I’ll win this battle just for kicks…thrown at the side of his throat.
not bad
Yo, your crew’s BEEN stared stiff, but it’ll only take one punch prolly
…leaving this has Ben Stiller…like his wife in Along Came Polly.
lol at you capitalizing your wordplays.... okish

Originally Posted by Doc Holiday

Thanks for the vote sway Sworn before I posted props, anyway sorry im a lil late I key'd a verse up in here yesterday n when I hit post the server crrashed on me again so will re-do now

Gotta give props minus the played concepts you a funny ole geek
But if we honestly speek, you jus the ole me minus the heat
self hype but okish
Silently creep n fam really its US that thinks ya flows shitty
I mean how you NOT get nominated H.O.F.......
When GANG makes up over half the voting commitee
LMAO, damn
Chokin ya silly but keep postin you DRUNK we all past doubt
Shit if ya young ass got a GUINESS book record you'd probably pass out
nice wordplay execution was weak
Get blast now you Peter Pan here n 1 hook'll harm ya health
Me i'm calm as hell
You the 1 followin his footsteps tryna find a shadow of ya former self
okish
Have ya callin help but son chill I aint gotta violantly murk
Jus silently smurk, check the pound to the dollar see
Im already at double ya worth
nonono
You in trouble for cert, ya whole cliques a vision of shook
No I aint JK, but i will beat kami's ass wit the latest wizardin book
dont get it

- Peace

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close, i have to say a tie.... doc had some decent personals, & kami had a few good punches

[BrayInWav]

oh, i thought crew wasnt allowed to vote in this...

since seyance voted, i will vote


it was pretty close overall, both had some decent lines with personals/punches... both had a couple of lines that could've been better... the ben stiller line for kami and the wizarding book for doc were examples of that... and it really came down to two lines imo... kami's line about the forum doc came from vs. doc's line about the HOF voting committee and doc's line was a bit harder hitting in that respect so

vote - doc

[Doc Holiday]

Dunno what Sey found hard about the NO CREW VOTES part but since we got 2 crew votes in here thats it n dunno if we should count Styks with it being a tie vote seems pointless upto Kami as it stands

3-2 Doc

- Peace.

[Lee Gully]

It's peace to me either way fammo...

Lol, nice drop Doc...it's good to see you almost back to your old self. If I do lose this one...you owe me a rematch AFTER I finish these papers and exams.

3-2 Doc

[Doc Holiday]

No doubt playa same if you win we gon have to do this again you have actually inspired me this battle so think i might try n get back into it a bit,
see if I could do this again

- Peace.