Flow.

[Seyance]

Flow.

I'm the rawest speaker-talkin ether,
& By the looks of that verse..
Multi-syllables ain't your thing either,
Next time i'll do more than teach ya,
Get tore by the force of this walkin' creature,
It ain't at all a short procedure,
I'll leave you at the gates so long,
We could start to call him peter..
I spit arsenic threw halfa this,
You'll have the shortest feature,
Plus all of your support is bleaker..
Especially when i spit & draw the heater,
Bitch my shit is off the meter
Rippin' this with the sort of cleaver..
That could fall & chalk the reaper of grim,
Look at the state i'm leavin' him in,
I'll speak & beat out all demon in him..
He's laid out like a piece've even linen,
My asophegis off to top is sick..
& I'm the real chieftain of sin,
Total control over the legions within,
The realest bleedin' beast of the skin,
Who sits around and sleeps..
But stays breathin' to win,
Cause it's all thats needed here..
See it's clear.. the mark is you
I'll beat your fear with dark tissue,
Which is where i put the spark in too,
Burn half this dude like a blast imbue..
A blizzard look it's big enough
To cover twenty blue cars in glue,
& Still have the last laugh with you.
This is just abit of flow, spittin' it to rip it bro
Your a ridiculous little bitch fo'sho,
I'm British, living with this sickle cell..
Damn.. i'm sick as hell.
Your a pussy with a chicken smell,
Just cause you've got a brittle shell..
No wonder that you didn't sell,
Keep drownin' ya sorrows in miguel.



links
Thrice - First offence
Stand Out - 16 Bars

[InCizion]

Nice flow..... nothing to spectacular.....

See it's clear.. the mark is you
I'll beat your fear with dark tissue,
Which is where i put the spark in too,
Burn half this dude like a blast imbue..

This was nice........

Now I see why you hate so much on me... Were just two very differant styles... You need to open up your mind and stop the hate....

[Seyance]

God, the 'term' hate is pure bullshit.. it's just real talk, if you want me to sugarcoat my feedback.. then you shouldn't be here, it's about OPINIONS not hate.. open up YOUR mind to the fact i just don't like your shit and it's nothing personal.

[Mic Jordan]

Nice Rhyme Scheme in this piece. Good Vocab shown. Its above your everyday braggadocio text piece. my favorite parts were

It ain't at all a short procedure,
I'll leave you at the gates so long,
We could start to call him peter..
I spit arsenic threw halfa this,
You'll have the shortest feature,
Plus all of your support is bleaker..
Especially when i spit & draw the heater,
Bitch my shit is off the meter
Rippin' this with the sort of cleaver..
That could fall & chalk the reaper of grim,
Look at the state i'm leavin' him in,
I'll speak & beat out all demon in him..
He's laid out like a piece've even linen,
My asophegis off to top is sick..
& I'm the real chieftain of sin,
Total control over the legions within,
The realest bleedin' beast of the skin,

See it's clear.. the mark is you
I'll beat your fear with dark tissue,
Which is where i put the spark in too,
Burn half this dude like a blast imbue..
A blizzard look it's big enough
To cover twenty blue cars in glue,
& Still have the last laugh with you.
This is just abit of flow, spittin' it to rip it bro
Your a ridiculous little bitch fo'sho,
I'm British, living with this sickle cell..
Damn.. i'm sick as hell.
Your a pussy with a chicken smell,
Just cause you've got a brittle shell..
No wonder that you didn't sell,
Keep drownin' ya sorrows in miguel.

Keep it up

[Mic Jordan]

p.s return the favor on my piece

Arr-Ogance Mic Jordan

[theman080]

It lived up to the title

Dope shit Sey

Flow was on point