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A Poem - 06-27-2007 , 08:34 AM


A Poem

My time ticking clocks slow down
Awaiting the sound
Voice of the chosen words wise spoken hoping
To make it through noticed
Good deeds done for dirt
Smiles and tortured laugher does the hurt
The saddest jerk a clown made a mockery of
Open arms hugs a hypocrisy’s love
A diamond’s journey to glisten brilliant
Closer to happiness a savage kiss
His ear turns seconds to days
Days to years in the blink of GOD’S eye I’m hear
How easy he did believe in me
And kept these gates closed
Now the world is ready to receive me
I stood in the storm it rages no more
Preparing me for what is to come
My bodies mind is numb
My sprit touches the drum
Sound escapes from the depths of lungs sprung
Admonish the liar respect the fire
Subdue mans desire stay close to the ones that cry
The fire expands from thought to the hand
From the ink to the paper conception to question the birth of a poem


Written by Gemar Andre Ridley aka Da One and Only aka Mahogany Brown aka Gemarichibon aka Permanent

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Re: A Poem - 06-27-2007 , 09:21 PM


Nice Poem. Very fluent.

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